launderette poem

Examples: "his small possessions swim" ( meaning there isn't a lot of cloths so they just swim around)
"They nose and nudge the porthole glass like flotsam" ( it's a simile. Floatsam means the floating wreckage of a ship .

This poem is negative , because it uses the words: dour ( which means like

Class notes 29/01/16

He woke up in the middle of a cold night with by the sound of the raindrops hitting his window. When he stood up he thought "these peanuts are making me thirsty"

Tone: voice

Mood: setting using imagery

When she came out of the cabin, all she saw was the blue sky and the fluffy snow waiting for her. Smiling to her self, she thought "today's the perfect day to ski"

Poem paragraph

This poem is about the season, automn and also how the winter is waiting to be around. This poem uses great sight and sound imagery. "Those once green leaves turn Red, yellow, orange, and brown." And "CRRNCH! go the leaves,,"
Thai poem also includes onomatopoeia ^ 

Poems

Symbolic poem

In the Dark Night Sky

In the Dark Night Sky, a “Pale Moon” now arises suddenly, 
With clouds of ice sparkling in a frozen-cold ring around it; 
While your bright, rosy-cheeked face appears as a paste-like
Image of a grinning and laughing White Dwarf so happy!
 
A Million-Times-Brighter-Hell-Hot Supernova emerges now, 
With a colossal colored-array of jewels firmly fixed upon the
Trajectory of a brilliant star trailing and exploding its waves,
As it shakes its cosmic dust on all of your light-filled dreams! 

Divinity travels through my veins like warm blood free-flowing;
And as one radiant supercharged beauty kisses God’s very face,
She finds His divine and infinite picture—His view of our Cosmos,  
Where the souls of Mankind seek the final spirit of their being!
 
Wild Moon Dogs howl joyous echoes bouncing into an infinity, 
As they choose to dance to an ancient song of peace and love. 
This is the final message of the pale moon’s image cresting now
Lonely across the Dark Night Sky as it reflects God’s Starlight!

Imagery poem


The chilly weather settles into your bones.
Those once green leaves turn
Red, yellow, orange, and brown.
CRRNCH! go the leaves,,
Beneath  your feet.
The birds fly in a victory “V” formation,
To where the sun rules the skies.
The days of winter are lurking around
Waiting to be free falling.

Class notes 15/1/16

Character

Flat - caricature (1 characteristics )

archetype ( 2-3 characteristics )

Round

The lady from land lady is a caricature at the beginning but then she shows her evilness which makes her a archetype.

Billy- polite, trusting, curious. Naive, honest

*naive means like innocent
Landlady= sweet, kind, evil, wierd,
The landlady to billy as the spider to a insect

Film plot 101

ordinary world
Disruption
Conflict
Climax
Denoment
Resolution
The decision for r to get half of the credit symbolizes that it's not worth much
Ordinary world: r is a scavenger on a desert planet
Disruption: BB8
Conflict:
3. Man vs himself r is having a conflict with her self
2.man vs technology when r pushes random button and get monsters out
1. Man vs himself deciding if r should sell bb8
4. Man vs man she faces the guy who killed Han Solo
5.man vs himself when she realizes that she's a Jedi
6.man vs man

The lifesaber is symbolic

Symbol

Inference -> what is ->Implied/implicit

The child is the woman's child
The sail is full of wind
The man is the father of the child
The man is rowing the boat
They are going somewhere
The mans job is to row
The woman holding the child represents love and care
The man rowing the boat symbolizes strength